Yes, it will be coming to Steam. Sorry for the slow reply, been so busy between this latest update and revamping some of the old content in the prologue!
The latest update is now out to our highest tier patrons and subscribestars! Over the coming days it will trickle down to a public release :) This update largely focuses on Ves the orc, and includes 'partial' of the homogenizing of the art (though we still have a way to go!) While many of the technical aspects have been overhauled and improved, they aren't 'fully' ready yet but it's light years ahead of what it was.
When The Update Is Coming...I want That update you know this game is pretty interesting..cuz From a No one to one of the handsome man..i m just waiting to get into the court And Fuck the princess..but whatever JUST TELL ME WHEN THE UPDATE IS COMING AND IT SHOULD BETTER BE A LENGHTY ONE..(i m sorry i liked this game very much but i m broke as hell..right now i will contribute but not now)..
I've got some very mixed feelings about this one! I'll start with the positives.
For one thing, it's one of the nicest Ren'Py games I've seen on Itch so far. There's a bare bones combat system implemented that shows promise for the future. The sound design is very top notch, I thought all the foley and sound effects were very nicely chosen.
On the other hand I do have some criticism's...
The scope of the plot is kind of strange and all over the place, imo.
Can spot clear plot inspirations from Attack on Titan & Game of Thrones and even Starship Troopers of all things. In fact, it's easier to think of this as some kind of erotic crossover fanfiction spinoff than it's own thing.
I don't want to criticize the combat too much as it's clearly a prototype and the creator is working on making it better, I imagine. They've said something about an overhaul of the whole game so I imagine a lot of the issues I mention are already on their way to being fixed.
My other biggest problems would be the shortage of romance options in the game. So far I'd say there's about two and a half that I've found so far. I'd like to see more variation in the romance options as well. I don't just mean personality's of the women, I also mean body types. Make the women more distinct as the current 3 options are all... too similiar.
The art style isn't consistent. This is being worked on and fixed, I've read. But it's quite jarring. I started the game in Not-Winterfell and got sent to the wall to fight the not-white-walkers, grumpkins and snarks, only to wind up in a strange bootcamp mashup of Starship Troopers and Attack on Titan, maybe a pinch of full metal jacket. Got sent to Klendathu where Dizzy gets killed by an arachnid. Then I found the titan serum which, ended up transforming me into a marvel universe symbiote. Which is aight because it made my character more handsome and chiselled and stuff. But man, this paragraph should paint the idea of all the clashing art styles and ideas going on in this game.
As well, more complaints about the women. I just didn't find any of them particularly attractive. Should definitely spice them up a lot more. Your scout-wife looks very unattractive in her full combat getup and when she loses the clothes it doesn't have enough of a "Grand Reveal" feeling to it. Maybe hide something under the clothing like interesting tattoo's with backstory's or scars or something, so we can learn about the female character by romancing her. As it stands the sex scenes feel entirely arbitrary and have little impact on the plot.
It's also really silly to mention this, especially since it's something being worked on, but during combat, when my character attacks, his foot lifts off the ground and points towards the enemy, very strangely. It almost makes me laugh which is, again, jarring, given the setting and general atmosphere of the game.
I want to finish the review strong though, and mention how I have high hopes for this game despite the initial awkwardness you can find in this beta version. It seems to have a strong artistic vision it's moving towards. The audio is very good. As well, I haven't mentioned at all how much I appreciate the solid writing of the game. I poked fun at the plot structure, but when interacting with NPC's, I noticed no spelling mistakes, or sloppy amateur sounding writing like in several other erogames out there right now. I even enjoy Markus as a Deuteragonist. He's fun. None of the characters speak in an unbelievable way and I'm thankful that this game holds back on spewing paragraphs of author tract at you like most erogames and visual novels tend to do. Every visual novel or erogame tends to have a lot of rambling about inane subects nobody cares about somewhere in the game. Whereas, in this game, I only ended up skipping some of the combat scenes that didn't involve actual combat. The battle between the dwarf dude and the Balrog for example, felt a bit long winded, over the top, overly long and overly detailed. He wasn't exactly a memorable character to begin with (he looks like he walked off the set of the Warcraft Movie) and so when he began to face his inevitable demise I kind of rolled my eyes and began double-tapping my spacebar like a paintball gun to slog through all the dialogue. And whence he was dead I didn't really mourn him in any significant way. It didn't effect the plot too deeply. It was just a semi random event that went into a deep description of the gorey battle between the two.... for some reason? Besides looking like a dwarf out of World of Warcraft, he wasn't a very compelling character. As well, it feels somewhat out of place in a comical way, yet again, that your drill instructor is basically a brawny midget who dies anyway shortly after you bother remembering to memorize his name.
Also, having watched Starship Troopers, I'd say your scoutwifes death is entirely too predictable. She even dies, almost shot for shot, the same way as Dizzy did. You know damn well what I'm talking about lol.
I don't mean to shit on your project, I just mean to say her demise was very much seen coming by me a mile away, you need to work on that, maybe make it less predictable that she's your Aerith.
All that being said, I still really enjoyed this game, especially considering I didn't drop a dime on it. (Sorry! I'm broke as a joke!)
If you could like, expand upon the content by like 14 hours and VASTLY improve the combat, I could see myself really sinking my teeth into that as a satisfying experience.
For some suggestions on how to improve the combat:
-Shaders, shaders, shaders!!
-Attack/spell animations besides rotating arms and a sound effect
-Screen shakes/Screen Flashes
-Don't let me see my characters health fall into negative values. Markus got struck and his health fell all the way to -24, then he died. It works good for debug purposes to see this, and see how the attacks are working "under the hood" but don't let your player see this. It comes across very amateurish. Once the value hits 0 it shouldn't fall any further. It breaks immersion.
Anyway, I loved the game. I hope to see much more of it and I'd love to see how it expands and unfolds as time goes on.
One final note, maybe try and change the art for the players transformations. As it stands the two of them remind me of Venom and Carnage and... blegh. It clashes really hard with all the allusions made to game of thrones and attack on titan to have these spidey-verse characters flying around in the fields like that. It's extremely odd. I can't understate how jarring and strange it was to see my characters final transformation. They don't look like they belong anywhere in this game. You really need to fix that, lol.
Anyway, good luck, I'll be keeping a close eye on this one!
Just started playing this and i can't see the s*x scene lmao. I'm playing on Android the letter thing is on the way can't see it :(. Much better if they add the "HIDE" in the bottom or maybe add gallery which is those H scenes and then just replay it much better if the letter thing is not in there anymore since u already know the text in there isn't? Well that's my only problem in this game. Well actually I just played this like 5% on it since my sister is on my goddamn room. And yeah I hope they may add something in next update and those I mentioned I hope they add it. The game is great...im looking forward on next update.
We're having some issues with Android and MAC at the moment, but we're looking into it. We have a plan to input a ingame gallery soon along with many other major improvements with the upcoming revamp work(s) - The first part to the revamp will be in late March
You'll be able to buy more health potions with the upcoming update, which will introduce a store into the game as well as other content/technical improvements etc.
So just to keep people up to date here, the next update (our planned steam launch) will include a massive overhaul for the UI, combat and general quality of life stuff. We're ALSO planning on overhauling some of the old art, (like character models) to try make the art as consistent as possible, a mini-update should be put up here in a day or two (our new years special mini release), but then the next update will be the main one. Thank you to anyone who has supported us so far, we're working hard and excited to show you what we've got in the coming months :)
Are there any alternative download links? Mega wants me to pay to get past its download cap and Google Drive says something about the file being in the owner's trash.
So: Kiara's breasts when in the naked drawing while talking? Great. Kiara's breasts while doing the sex? How the hell did they become so big and flaccid? Her face too looked different from the previous drawings... Somehow she looked older or idk.
I must say that scene was a huge disappointment: expected something way better, after having seen the drawing of her just naked while standing
I downloaded the game (Mac version) and when I went into the folder I couldn't find the file to open the game. Can someone help me find or tell me if I maybe did something wrong
Hi, I need help. I got stuck after saving Ves where Markus asks to meet at the Iron Unicorn at night but there was nothing there and story is not progressing anymore.
Also Ves asks for medicine but I cannot see any active building in the Mage District.
Playing on Mac version. Every 'return to city' prompt takes you back to housing district, instead of whatever district you were in. Locations are mentioned which don't seem to exist (yet?), I can't find or visit Adara upon return to city, and can't find mage location to get medicine for Ves.
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This game is a struggle to judge. Obviously, it's a good game, but it's just *weird* in so many ways. I'll try and go through the ones I remember.
Sprites used in dialogue can be wildly different from those used in sex scenes, or even just in wide shots. It almost feels like a bunch of different artists were used and each told a general idea of what to do but had no real restrictions. This lack of cohesion feels a bit strange, but it's not awful or anything.
The world itself is relatively interesting, the way characters actually mention dates, names, and locations make the world feel lived in. But you'll be given story beats that are extremely obvious set-ups for things that will happen later and multiple cliches are used, to the point where I was simply going "oh they've said this line, so clearly this will happen" and 15 minutes later it plays exactly how I said it would.
Combat feels almost tacked on but it's still appreciated to break up the reading. Music is...present, sometimes. The dialogue itself (minus the cliches and set-ups) is pretty decent. I myself find dialogue to be the hardest part of writing, so the characters don't pull you out like many (*many* MANY) VNs do.
TL;DR the game is decent but weird in how it's made, I hope it continues getting better and better and that the loose threads can be tidied up.
Overall this game seems amazing, the writers ability to capture the attention of readers throughout is astounding and had me enraptured constantly. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Edit: Would also like to mention the artwork is beautiful, props to the artists.
A minor suggestion. see if you can get it to work through the itch.io desktop app. I'm not super tech savy so I prefer to go through methods like the desktop app because it operates like steam does. just click to install and then play when it finishes.
Here is my review of the game, the story writing and setting are very great, western erotic visual novels are usually just about petty drama and what not so it's refreshing to see a game that has substance behind the story so 10/10 regarding that, as for mechanics it's not anything special but it gets 6/10 the job done, art-wise considering this was done in a limited budget I can't expect too much, with that being said it is still good so a 7/10, in my opinion, this game is a solid 7.5/10 needs some more polishing but huge potential. Look forward to what is in store for the future.
Agreed, we are already re-working on the combat so it is better looking and more fluid. And art wise we are trying to be more consistent with the artists so everything looks more or less in the same style.
The game is pretty early in development with a lot of work still in progress. The art looks good, though the girls' 'novel'appearance differs from their 'scene' appearance for no reason(like hair color and accessories on Nija or complexion change on Kiara). The story is there, but some seemingly serious choices lead to no consequences(like the one before the final fight of this build; the one on the square was pretty atmospheric though). The combat needs work, not much else to say here. And why would you use facial animations in dialogues? My eyes are down there, on the text, and I've only noticed them waay into the game. That's just my preference though - static images allow for more details (so Nija might not've lost her chains).
Please don't let any of that rant discourage you - you're doing great work here, and I hope to see more of it.
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fam can you help me? could you copy and paste the link here in our chat. i would be grateful
https://mega.nz/file/FhdXFb6B#8azWmb-BO9KuBIZ4XzqzuA254qZVb8O1MvWNDDcDbx8
Question. When will the android version work again?
How do i download the game ?
The link redirect only to patreon. Is it normal ?
The Patreon post is public and it takes you to a page with the Mega download link
is asking for a key to download
Can't give diamond as they aren't there ever after I get it and Arlena isn't at the blacksmith's after the night out.
Yes, it will be coming to Steam. Sorry for the slow reply, been so busy between this latest update and revamping some of the old content in the prologue!
Download links broken. both google and mega files do not exist.
No idea why that happened and only just saw! The public build links should be working now! 0.135 build
is there a gallery where i can review all the scenes ive encounter? or do i have to save a file before each scene?
there will be a gallery in the next update
The latest update (Revamp part I) is now out to the public! Enjoy!
The latest update is now out to our highest tier patrons and subscribestars! Over the coming days it will trickle down to a public release :) This update largely focuses on Ves the orc, and includes 'partial' of the homogenizing of the art (though we still have a way to go!) While many of the technical aspects have been overhauled and improved, they aren't 'fully' ready yet but it's light years ahead of what it was.
When The Update Is Coming...I want That update you know this game is pretty interesting..cuz From a No one to one of the handsome man..i m just waiting to get into the court And Fuck the princess..but whatever JUST TELL ME WHEN THE UPDATE IS COMING AND IT SHOULD BETTER BE A LENGHTY ONE..(i m sorry i liked this game very much but i m broke as hell..right now i will contribute but not now)..
I've got some very mixed feelings about this one! I'll start with the positives. For one thing, it's one of the nicest Ren'Py games I've seen on Itch so far. There's a bare bones combat system implemented that shows promise for the future. The sound design is very top notch, I thought all the foley and sound effects were very nicely chosen. On the other hand I do have some criticism's... The scope of the plot is kind of strange and all over the place, imo. Can spot clear plot inspirations from Attack on Titan & Game of Thrones and even Starship Troopers of all things. In fact, it's easier to think of this as some kind of erotic crossover fanfiction spinoff than it's own thing. I don't want to criticize the combat too much as it's clearly a prototype and the creator is working on making it better, I imagine. They've said something about an overhaul of the whole game so I imagine a lot of the issues I mention are already on their way to being fixed. My other biggest problems would be the shortage of romance options in the game. So far I'd say there's about two and a half that I've found so far. I'd like to see more variation in the romance options as well. I don't just mean personality's of the women, I also mean body types. Make the women more distinct as the current 3 options are all... too similiar. The art style isn't consistent. This is being worked on and fixed, I've read. But it's quite jarring. I started the game in Not-Winterfell and got sent to the wall to fight the not-white-walkers, grumpkins and snarks, only to wind up in a strange bootcamp mashup of Starship Troopers and Attack on Titan, maybe a pinch of full metal jacket. Got sent to Klendathu where Dizzy gets killed by an arachnid. Then I found the titan serum which, ended up transforming me into a marvel universe symbiote. Which is aight because it made my character more handsome and chiselled and stuff. But man, this paragraph should paint the idea of all the clashing art styles and ideas going on in this game. As well, more complaints about the women. I just didn't find any of them particularly attractive. Should definitely spice them up a lot more. Your scout-wife looks very unattractive in her full combat getup and when she loses the clothes it doesn't have enough of a "Grand Reveal" feeling to it. Maybe hide something under the clothing like interesting tattoo's with backstory's or scars or something, so we can learn about the female character by romancing her. As it stands the sex scenes feel entirely arbitrary and have little impact on the plot. It's also really silly to mention this, especially since it's something being worked on, but during combat, when my character attacks, his foot lifts off the ground and points towards the enemy, very strangely. It almost makes me laugh which is, again, jarring, given the setting and general atmosphere of the game. I want to finish the review strong though, and mention how I have high hopes for this game despite the initial awkwardness you can find in this beta version. It seems to have a strong artistic vision it's moving towards. The audio is very good. As well, I haven't mentioned at all how much I appreciate the solid writing of the game. I poked fun at the plot structure, but when interacting with NPC's, I noticed no spelling mistakes, or sloppy amateur sounding writing like in several other erogames out there right now. I even enjoy Markus as a Deuteragonist. He's fun. None of the characters speak in an unbelievable way and I'm thankful that this game holds back on spewing paragraphs of author tract at you like most erogames and visual novels tend to do. Every visual novel or erogame tends to have a lot of rambling about inane subects nobody cares about somewhere in the game. Whereas, in this game, I only ended up skipping some of the combat scenes that didn't involve actual combat. The battle between the dwarf dude and the Balrog for example, felt a bit long winded, over the top, overly long and overly detailed. He wasn't exactly a memorable character to begin with (he looks like he walked off the set of the Warcraft Movie) and so when he began to face his inevitable demise I kind of rolled my eyes and began double-tapping my spacebar like a paintball gun to slog through all the dialogue. And whence he was dead I didn't really mourn him in any significant way. It didn't effect the plot too deeply. It was just a semi random event that went into a deep description of the gorey battle between the two.... for some reason? Besides looking like a dwarf out of World of Warcraft, he wasn't a very compelling character. As well, it feels somewhat out of place in a comical way, yet again, that your drill instructor is basically a brawny midget who dies anyway shortly after you bother remembering to memorize his name. Also, having watched Starship Troopers, I'd say your scoutwifes death is entirely too predictable. She even dies, almost shot for shot, the same way as Dizzy did. You know damn well what I'm talking about lol. I don't mean to shit on your project, I just mean to say her demise was very much seen coming by me a mile away, you need to work on that, maybe make it less predictable that she's your Aerith. All that being said, I still really enjoyed this game, especially considering I didn't drop a dime on it. (Sorry! I'm broke as a joke!) If you could like, expand upon the content by like 14 hours and VASTLY improve the combat, I could see myself really sinking my teeth into that as a satisfying experience. For some suggestions on how to improve the combat: -Shaders, shaders, shaders!! -Attack/spell animations besides rotating arms and a sound effect -Screen shakes/Screen Flashes -Don't let me see my characters health fall into negative values. Markus got struck and his health fell all the way to -24, then he died. It works good for debug purposes to see this, and see how the attacks are working "under the hood" but don't let your player see this. It comes across very amateurish. Once the value hits 0 it shouldn't fall any further. It breaks immersion. Anyway, I loved the game. I hope to see much more of it and I'd love to see how it expands and unfolds as time goes on. One final note, maybe try and change the art for the players transformations. As it stands the two of them remind me of Venom and Carnage and... blegh. It clashes really hard with all the allusions made to game of thrones and attack on titan to have these spidey-verse characters flying around in the fields like that. It's extremely odd. I can't understate how jarring and strange it was to see my characters final transformation. They don't look like they belong anywhere in this game. You really need to fix that, lol. Anyway, good luck, I'll be keeping a close eye on this one!
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is there any content with ves right now ? i don't see the option to buy what she asked for.
Hey guys, just to you all know the update is still on-course and planned for this month. Thank you to everyone still checking in!
Just started playing this and i can't see the s*x scene lmao. I'm playing on Android the letter thing is on the way can't see it :(. Much better if they add the "HIDE" in the bottom or maybe add gallery which is those H scenes and then just replay it much better if the letter thing is not in there anymore since u already know the text in there isn't? Well that's my only problem in this game. Well actually I just played this like 5% on it since my sister is on my goddamn room. And yeah I hope they may add something in next update and those I mentioned I hope they add it. The game is great...im looking forward on next update.
Edit:nvm
We're having some issues with Android and MAC at the moment, but we're looking into it. We have a plan to input a ingame gallery soon along with many other major improvements with the upcoming revamp work(s) - The first part to the revamp will be in late March
Idk if anyone is having any problems with rolling back but, the rollback controls are not working for the windows update.
I can't open the Mac version after downloading, it says
The application “ParasiteBlack” can’t be opened.
yea idk why, I have the same problem
yeah same
We're working to address the MAC issues, sorry for the slow reply - We HOPEFULLY should have the issues resolved with the upcoming update.
How do you buy more health potions?
You'll be able to buy more health potions with the upcoming update, which will introduce a store into the game as well as other content/technical improvements etc.
ay thank you.
Where do I find 5 Bronze? Need help.
Go outside the castle gates and fight demorais there.
You can at max hunt for 2 rounds before sleeping for another day as your health would be to low by then
Man, wtf I thought I was playing this game cause I was horny. I forgot I was playing a porn game this shit sick.
Mac version does not start saying something is wrong with it. I have dl'ed it from both places and get the same error each time I try.
So just to keep people up to date here, the next update (our planned steam launch) will include a massive overhaul for the UI, combat and general quality of life stuff. We're ALSO planning on overhauling some of the old art, (like character models) to try make the art as consistent as possible, a mini-update should be put up here in a day or two (our new years special mini release), but then the next update will be the main one. Thank you to anyone who has supported us so far, we're working hard and excited to show you what we've got in the coming months :)
Are there any alternative download links? Mega wants me to pay to get past its download cap and Google Drive says something about the file being in the owner's trash.
normally you can wait for the countdown to continue the download :)
use a vpn and refresh the page thats what works for m
Download trough the itch client doesnt work. I suspect it is a captcha problem.
So: Kiara's breasts when in the naked drawing while talking? Great. Kiara's breasts while doing the sex? How the hell did they become so big and flaccid? Her face too looked different from the previous drawings... Somehow she looked older or idk.
I must say that scene was a huge disappointment: expected something way better, after having seen the drawing of her just naked while standing
After I met ves Markus asks to meet at the iron unicorn at night but I can't and the story isn't progressing
because that's all the story for now. maybe
I downloaded the game (Mac version) and when I went into the folder I couldn't find the file to open the game. Can someone help me find or tell me if I maybe did something wrong
Nvm found the problem downloaded the wrong version
Hi, I need help. I got stuck after saving Ves where Markus asks to meet at the Iron Unicorn at night but there was nothing there and story is not progressing anymore.
Also Ves asks for medicine but I cannot see any active building in the Mage District.
Playing on Mac version. Every 'return to city' prompt takes you back to housing district, instead of whatever district you were in. Locations are mentioned which don't seem to exist (yet?), I can't find or visit Adara upon return to city, and can't find mage location to get medicine for Ves.
New update gentlemen https://www.patreon.com/posts/59339187
I think the download link is outdated it says
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Added alternative links! Thanks for letting us know.
For those interested there is a new update and you can play it here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/new-update-is-59342986
Hey, is it possible to tell me what tag i can expect for the sex scene ? (you know like, footjob, handjob, ntr, etc)
Edit: nvm i found them, they are on the patreon page
This game is a struggle to judge. Obviously, it's a good game, but it's just *weird* in so many ways. I'll try and go through the ones I remember.
Sprites used in dialogue can be wildly different from those used in sex scenes, or even just in wide shots. It almost feels like a bunch of different artists were used and each told a general idea of what to do but had no real restrictions. This lack of cohesion feels a bit strange, but it's not awful or anything.
The world itself is relatively interesting, the way characters actually mention dates, names, and locations make the world feel lived in. But you'll be given story beats that are extremely obvious set-ups for things that will happen later and multiple cliches are used, to the point where I was simply going "oh they've said this line, so clearly this will happen" and 15 minutes later it plays exactly how I said it would.
Combat feels almost tacked on but it's still appreciated to break up the reading. Music is...present, sometimes. The dialogue itself (minus the cliches and set-ups) is pretty decent. I myself find dialogue to be the hardest part of writing, so the characters don't pull you out like many (*many* MANY) VNs do.
TL;DR the game is decent but weird in how it's made, I hope it continues getting better and better and that the loose threads can be tidied up.
if you're reading through the comments section of this game, grab some popcorn, cuz shit gets vocal.
Overall this game seems amazing, the writers ability to capture the attention of readers throughout is astounding and had me enraptured constantly. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Edit: Would also like to mention the artwork is beautiful, props to the artists.
Mac version works.
A minor suggestion. see if you can get it to work through the itch.io desktop app. I'm not super tech savy so I prefer to go through methods like the desktop app because it operates like steam does. just click to install and then play when it finishes.
I like it, Tho im a little curious if they turn out to be partners, or merge into one ? If its anything like darkness 2, then its my cup of tea.
Artwork for the princess looked hot, thats my type ^_~ So my answer was obvious when Markcus asked me who I'd go for first^_~
There will be harem options in this tho... right ?
Here is my review of the game, the story writing and setting are very great, western erotic visual novels are usually just about petty drama and what not so it's refreshing to see a game that has substance behind the story so 10/10 regarding that, as for mechanics it's not anything special but it gets 6/10 the job done, art-wise considering this was done in a limited budget I can't expect too much, with that being said it is still good so a 7/10, in my opinion, this game is a solid 7.5/10 needs some more polishing but huge potential. Look forward to what is in store for the future.
Agreed, we are already re-working on the combat so it is better looking and more fluid. And art wise we are trying to be more consistent with the artists so everything looks more or less in the same style.
Thanks for the review,
Jim
The game is pretty early in development with a lot of work still in progress. The art looks good, though the girls' 'novel'appearance differs from their 'scene' appearance for no reason(like hair color and accessories on Nija or complexion change on Kiara). The story is there, but some seemingly serious choices lead to no consequences(like the one before the final fight of this build; the one on the square was pretty atmospheric though). The combat needs work, not much else to say here. And why would you use facial animations in dialogues? My eyes are down there, on the text, and I've only noticed them waay into the game. That's just my preference though - static images allow for more details (so Nija might not've lost her chains).
Please don't let any of that rant discourage you - you're doing great work here, and I hope to see more of it.